Wednesday, June 10, 2009

Draft of Second Educational Video

One week to go!

Please reply below with a link to your video draft. In class today and tomorrow, you'll have the chance to get comments from each other - try to get as many constructive comments on how to improve the piece as you can.

Remember also that this is a video for a student audience; your video should not be directed at other teachers or at parents. Anything that is genuinely valuable for students will be helpful for adults, too, of course.

It may be that there are two or twenty thousand kids and teachers around the world who will benefit from what you do, so put your heart in it!
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57 comments:

  1. Joseph ColemanJune 10, 2009 at 7:42 AM

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  2. Joseph ColemanJune 10, 2009 at 7:44 AM

    http://eev3.liu.edu/ee0810/JC/Video1.html
    (here's where my second video is posted)

    http://jcoleman01.blogspot.com/2009/06/summer-video-week-4.html
    (please post comments on my blog here)

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  3. Jess OJune 10, 2009 at 8:45 AM

    http://bakerscorner2.blogspot.com/2009/06/how-to-make-and-color-royal-icing-take.html


    Here it is!!!! Move over Martha Stewart....... SO this is a draft but i will be adding more on Measurement to the beginning and also adding subtitles to when I actually add the ingredients!! And yes I know I spelled ingredients wrong!!! The new title will be Using Measurement to make icing. Thanks for looking! Jess

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  4. jvarrJune 10, 2009 at 9:13 AM

    Hi all,

    My second video draft is available for comments on my blog.

    http://jvarr-workshops.blogspot.com/

    Thanks,
    John V.

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  5. KristinaJune 10, 2009 at 10:41 AM

    http://kkennedy0410.blogspot.com/

    draft of video2

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  6. JennyJune 10, 2009 at 11:20 AM

    http://jennymath.blogspot.com/

    Here is my 2nd video. It is also on the "outline" blog.

    Jennifer
    Rosler

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  7. paulineJune 10, 2009 at 1:30 PM

    HI Rushton,
    Here is my video, it said still processing and that it would get clearer. When re watched actual video, it was clear. Hope this will be also.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qkryn1QSljw

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  8. dvasti714June 10, 2009 at 2:10 PM

    http://dvasti714.blogspot.com/

    my video is uploaded on my blog.
    thanks!
    dawn

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  9. Christine DePaloJune 10, 2009 at 2:57 PM

    http://christinedepalo.blogspot.com/2009/06/draft-2-after-revisions.html
    Sorry I posted with the outlines.

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  10. Mrs. KavanaghJune 10, 2009 at 3:15 PM

    Hello!
    The second draft is posted on my blog at: http://alanocevideoclass.blogspot.com/

    Looking forward to comments!

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  11. LaurenJune 10, 2009 at 3:24 PM

    Here is my first draft of my second video!
    All suggestions are welcome :)

    http://lhempfling.blogspot.com/2009/06/silent-
    e.html

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  12. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 3:47 PM

    Here is the first draft of my second video on Internet Safety Tips

    http://bjerabek.blogspot.com/

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  13. NicoleJune 10, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    Hello Rushton, here is the draft of my second video http://nmassano.blogspot.com/. A lot easier to produce then the first one!! Any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated.Thanks! You will find this comment under your second outline post as well...sorry, I had put it there first being a didn't see another spot to do so initially.

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  14. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 5:55 PM

    My Draft is ready.

    http://alisonjay.blogspot.com/

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  15. Julia CavaJune 10, 2009 at 6:31 PM

    Hi All,

    The draft for my second video is ready!

    http://juliacava.blogspot.com/

    Have fun!
    Julia

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  16. Ms. BingerJune 10, 2009 at 7:00 PM

    Hey everyone,

    I had to change my subject for my second video. The Claymation wasn't possible in this short time frame so this video is a continuation of my first video. You can view it on my blog http://bingeredtek.blogspot.com/

    Cheers,

    Wendy Binger

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  17. Kristina DesianteJune 10, 2009 at 7:35 PM

    My second educational video is available for viewing on my blog.

    http://kristinadesiante.blogspot.com

    I already have some ideas of what I'm going to be adding in so this is a very rough draft.

    Kristina Desiante

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  18. Geri ZorskasJune 10, 2009 at 7:48 PM

    Hello all,

    My Second Student-Audience Video is now posted on my blog. Unfortunatley due to a crazy week and time constraints I too had to change my video topic from stained glass to Mosaic - but I think thats equally as fun!! Check out my video on my blog - I am thinking its a bit slow.. feedback would be great.

    http://gzorskas.blogspot.com/

    Thanks,
    Geri

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  19. jstrum624June 10, 2009 at 8:34 PM

    Hey Everyone,

    My video is posted on my blog. http://jstrum.blogspot.com

    Please let me know what you think of the content, audio will be added once I have my speaking voice back in full use after a bad cold.

    Thanks,

    Jay

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  20. Mrs. OrtizJune 10, 2009 at 8:53 PM

    Ok, mine is ready to go. It's as good as it gets. Any comments would be appreciated.
    http://jeannineortizedtblog.blogspot.com/

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  21. C. CarotaJune 10, 2009 at 9:21 PM

    Hi, HHH T.E.A.M.!
    Yikes, this was tough! I think I spent all my creative energy with the first video! Seriously, the Freytag's Pyramid using Romeo and Juliet was an inspiration and all the pieces fell into place...but this one...not so much! Consequently, it is lacking in the creativity department, but I do think, with the right amount of tweaking, it could prove to be an effective tool for my students to use along with the graphic organizer I give them.
    Sooooo, as always, I look forward to the comments...enjoy!

    You can find my video on my blog at

    http://carotablog.blogspot.com/

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  22. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 10:32 PM

    Hello Rushton,
    On my google blog you can find a backup video called, The Viola and my Horse Grooming Video which you saw and commented on. I checked with the barn and I will need to wait for permission for the Horse Video. I don't know that I will have it in time for the end of this course. Please, I'd appreciate your feedback on The Viola. Thank you.

    http://kristyg-teachabc.blogspot.com/

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  23. Katie BehrJune 11, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    You can find my new video here

    http://sites.google.com/site/katiebehrsportolio/Home/movies

    This video is segment one of the final review. This video focuses on similes and metaphors.

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  24. Michael MccafferyJune 11, 2009 at 2:52 PM

    http://michaelmccaffery.blogspot.com/

    Here is the link to my second educational video on High pressure.

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  25. KristenJune 11, 2009 at 2:57 PM

    Here is the link to my second educational video!
    http://kristenpoulos.blogspot.com/2009/06/instructional-video-2-solving-algebraic.html

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  26. Steven WowkJune 11, 2009 at 3:05 PM

    Here is the link to my second educational video. I know it's a bit longer than what was requested but I couldn't cut anything! I hope you like it.

    http://wowkhhh.blogspot.com/2009/06/3rd-video-rainbow-cookies.html

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  27. eduTecherJune 11, 2009 at 3:22 PM

    Hey Gang -

    Check out my draft and let me know what ya think...

    http://bit.ly/11Zczo

    (In sad news I have to redo the whole thing because my hard drive couldn't take any more. I know there is a few sound issues, but will do the best I can.)

    Thanks for the feedback.

    Adam

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  28. Ashley RauJune 11, 2009 at 5:19 PM

    Hello -

    I originally posted my video earlier in the week to your previous post. I only saw that you had a new post now. I just didn't want you to think I submitted it late!

    Here is my blog with my 2nd educational video.

    http://ashleyrau.blogspot.com/

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  29. SavalisJune 12, 2009 at 5:19 AM

    Hello I've been posting my blogs and work on the first page of this site. I hope that was the right thing to do. All of my work is up to date, but if I am wrong i'm sorry about that.
    Here is my 2nd ed. video.
    http://Savalisc.blogspot.com

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  30. BDJune 13, 2009 at 7:29 AM

    Oops, I forgot to post here. Some of you have already seen and commented, thank you. Here's the link

    http://bill-team.blogspot.com/2009/06/first-draft-factoring-gcf.html

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  31. Mixed Greens and BerriesJune 14, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    Hello, after a week from hell, a crashed hard drive, lost data, and no computer until yesterday, I finally was able to get my draft of my video 2 up on my blog for your viewing and comments. Thanks!

    http://mixedgreenberry.blogspot.com/2009/06/video-2-version.html

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  32. eduTecherJune 14, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    Hi All - Just finished the "final version" of my second Educational Video. Thanks for all the great feedback - It has been a pleasure getting to share work with you.

    http://adambellow-videos.blogspot.com/2009/06/5-tips-and-tricks-for-smartboard.html

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  33. Mrs. OrtizJune 15, 2009 at 8:03 AM

    Hi Rushton,
    I commented on some of my teammates’ videos last Wednesday.. They are located at:

    http://ashleyrau.blogspot.com/2009/06/second-educational-video-draft.html?showComment=1244756923651#c2632896665115525726

    https://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=7660090920585732144&postID=3681150257938351577&page=1

    https://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=911183891506877656&postID=8278296225445666307&page=1

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  34. MattJune 15, 2009 at 2:55 PM

    Rushton,

    The final cut of my second educational video is available at

    http://eev3.liu.edu/hh0810/mt/eport/EDT720.html

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  35. AlisonJune 15, 2009 at 3:49 PM

    Hello Everyone!!!!!

    Here is my final copy of my second educational video on sun protection
    http://alikavanagh.blogspot.com/2009/06/final-draft-sun-protection.html

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  36. MattJune 15, 2009 at 3:52 PM

    ....Also, I sent you a copy of the video using YouSendIt.

    -Matt Testa

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  37. Matt MaloneyJune 15, 2009 at 4:39 PM

    http://team1212.blogspot.com/2009/06/mmaloney-nys-pe-learning-standards-b.html

    This is my second video edited. Not sure if this is where I post it but here you go.

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  38. Christine DePaloJune 15, 2009 at 5:55 PM

    Here is my final video #2
    http://christinedepalo.blogspot.com/2009/06/final-video-2-harlem-renaissance.html

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  39. mrandoneJune 15, 2009 at 6:09 PM

    Heres my final video! Enjoy...

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0U2y_x0dGjE

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  40. Ashley RauJune 15, 2009 at 6:41 PM

    Here is my final draft of the second video!

    http://ashleyrau.blogspot.com/

    Thanks for all of your comments on my draft!

    - Ashley :)

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  41. JennyJune 15, 2009 at 8:00 PM

    http://jennymath.blogspot.com/

    Here is my new video! The audio is finally fixed! Thanks!

    Jen

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  42. Doug M.June 16, 2009 at 1:31 PM

    Here is my second instructional video Revised.

    http://milanoshotspot.blogspot.com/2009/06/second-instructional-video-unit-price_16.html

    Enjoy!

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  43. e157ekaJune 16, 2009 at 1:42 PM

    this is my second video with even more information about harpsichords than anyone would care to know

    eric

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  44. Jon MautschkeJune 16, 2009 at 2:38 PM

    Here is the final draft of my second educational video. I also sent it over www.yousendit.com

    http://mautschke.blogspot.com/2009/06/final-draft-of-second-educational-video.html

    jon

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  45. Senorita TutinoJune 16, 2009 at 2:39 PM

    Here it is. The final draft of my second video. Thanks!

    http://laclasedesenoritatutino.blogspot.com/

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  46. laura's blogJune 16, 2009 at 3:20 PM

    Here's the final cut of my second video!

    http://www.menelawsblog.blogspot.com/

    Laura Menelaws

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  47. dvasti714June 16, 2009 at 3:44 PM

    My final video edit is up on my blog
    http://dvasti714.blogspot.com/

    -dawn vasti

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  48. Ashley RauJune 16, 2009 at 4:06 PM

    Rushton,

    I just wanted to let you know that my video was sent to you through yousendit.com.

    - Ashley

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  49. Mei-LynnJune 16, 2009 at 4:22 PM

    Hello!!

    The final revision of my second educational video can be found on my blog at…..

    http://fortheloveofchocolatelabs.blogspot.com/2009/06/second-educational-video-final-revision.html

    Thanks,
    Mei-Lynn

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  50. KristinaJune 16, 2009 at 4:26 PM

    Final draft of my second educational video

    http://kkennedy0410.blogspot.com/

    i also sent it using yousendit.com

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  51. blahblahblogJune 16, 2009 at 5:57 PM

    My final offering. Enjoy.

    http://tinyhouse-blahblahblog.blogspot.com/

    Thanks for all your help and encouragement.
    Maureen

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  52. LaurenJune 16, 2009 at 6:19 PM

    Here is the final copy of my video- The Silent E-
    I hope you Enjoy it! Thank you for all of your support!

    http://lhempfling.blogspot.com/2009/06/final-video-silent-e.html

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  53. KristenJune 16, 2009 at 6:32 PM

    Hello everyone!

    My revised video is ready!

    http://kristenpoulos.blogspot.com/2009/06/instructional-video-2-revised.html

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  54. NicoleJune 16, 2009 at 7:02 PM

    Here is where you will find my final draft of my second video on homophones: http://nmassano.blogspot.com/. I hope you enjoy and any feedback you may have is always welcome! Thanks for spending the semester with us! :)

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  55. Crandall's CreationJune 16, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    Hi All,

    Here is the final draft of my second instructional video.

    I hope you enjoy!

    http://crandallscreation.blogspot.com/2009/06/revised-instructional-video-2-three.html

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  56. paulineJune 16, 2009 at 7:10 PM

    HI RUSHTON,
    Here is my revised video. I could not upload it on the yousendit link. It is also on my blog but the title page and credit page are off center. It is fine on youtube. Enjoy!

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qkryn1QSljw

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  57. Joseph ColemanJune 16, 2009 at 7:11 PM

    http://eev3.liu.edu/ee0810/JC/Video1.html

    here's where my final video is posted. It's over 100MB so I have to do something with it to edit it down. Enjoy

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